Sunday, 4 February 2018

ALC708 - Assessment Portfolio part 2




ALC708 – Assessment Portfolio part 2

CRITICAL REFLECTION

by

Samuel Byrnand (217604105)

The research for this video was relatively simple to come by. In fact, one paper alone provided all the bibliographic ammunition I needed to build the topic, and I must commend Inoue-Smith for her excellent and informative reference list, which led me to the bulk of my research. I started by using seven peer reviewed articles and one journalistic article in the original edit of the video, but these references took up too much time and several had to be cut. In the end, I chose the four most relevant peer reviewed articles and stuck with them to build my narrative. This is a shame because Forbes published an article last year, stating that the use of Powerpoint in the boardroom and as a pitching device was considered brand damaging in the corporate world. I would have loved to have teased this out a little more, but it was too far off topic to be considered relevant.

The physical video capture was simple enough: my android phone and a $10 tripod were employed in the production, and I edited and rendered the final cut in Adobe Premiere. I would have loved to have played around with After Effects to really put some punchy spectacle into this video, but as my contract has recently kicked in again, and the fact that I am adjusting to a new medication, I just didn’t have time or energy.

One major issue I came up against was the importing of Quicktime screen video captures into Premiere. The QT .mov files would not play the game no matter what I tried, and I burned through a lot of time simply troubleshooting this issue... to no effect. The plan was to record parts of my own educational Powerpoints that I use in class, to show what an effective multimedia presentation can look like (especially in landscape design and political philosophy units). Powerpoint can be used as a simple CAD application and can produce some excellent 3D builds and deconstructions of various component structures. But in the end I just had to take a couple of screenshots and rethink most of the video plan. This is a new problem that really threw a spanner in the works, as I have used Quicktimes in Premiere previously and never had this particular issue before. 

Gremlins, eh?

Choosing from the available topics was tough as I had already podcasted the one that interested me the most. I vacillated for way too long before I settled on a topic for this video, and as a result, was left less time than I would have liked to create a fun video. You can tell by my reaction partway through the video that I realise I landed on the “wrong” topic, boring even myself in process! All I can do now is cross my fingers and pray that I have satisfied the criteria well enough to keep my assessors out of a coma…

As I was choosing between the topics provided I did catch myself dreaming of being able to choose our own topics for this assessment. I just did not click with any of the selection provided and this caused much anxiety in process, and left me with what I would describe as a flat and uninteresting video. I ensured to cover all of the criteria and to inject a little of my own personality into it, but by the time principal photography was complete there was not enough time to start again and make it awesome.

In all, this video did not come out to a standard that satisfies my personal criteria, and it certainly should not be taken as a general example of my production abilities. But it is what it is, and I hope my audience can get a little chuckle out it here and there.


"Powerpoint" is a trademark of the Microsoft Corporation.

"Keynote" is a trademark of the Apple Corporation.


REFERENCES                                                                          

Inoue-Smith, Y., 2016. College-based case studies in using PowerPoint effectively. Cogent Education, vol. 3, no. 1, doi: 10.1080/2331186x.2015.1127745  

Jones, A M 2003, The use and abuse of PowerPoint in Teaching and Learning in the Life Sciences: A Personal Overview. Bioscience Education, vol. 2, no. 1, pp. 1-13, doi: 10.3108/beej.2003.02000004

Signor, D 2009, Comparison analysis of the online lecture formats of PowerPoint and Webpage for online students, Same places, different spaces. Proceedings ascilite Auckland 2009, retrieved 25 January 2018, <https://www.researchgate.net/profile/Daniela_Signor/publication/237683676_Comparison_analysis_of_the_online_lecture_formats_of_PowerPoint_and_Webpage_for_online_students/links/550a171d0cf20f127f90d3a3/Comparison-analysis-of-the-online-lecture-formats-of-PowerPoint-and-Webpage-for-online-students.pdf >.

Young, J., 2004. When good technology means bad teaching: Giving professors gadgets without training can do more harm than good in the classroom, students say. The Chronicle of Higher Education, vol. 51, no. 12, pp. A31-A37.

ALJ728: Assessment Task 2

  Combating Indigenous "Invisibility"

by Samuel Byrnand

As another January 26 rolls around the nation stumbles over itself desperately trying to include everybody in a celebration that not everybody wishes to be part of. For approximately 3% of the nation Australia Day is a day of mourning; to be solemnly marked, but not celebrated. The significance of the 26th of January is magnified in 2018, as it backs up a hefty blow to the struggle for Indigenous self-determination in the Turnbull government’s outright rejection of the Uluru Statement of the Heart in October last year. And to further compound the issues, last year, of course, was the ten-year anniversary of the Northern Territory Intervention under the Howard government – an initiative that has touched every Indigenous person in the country despite the fact that the Indigenous communities affected were not consulted prior to its implementation. At a glance, it might appear that this 3% of our population are essentially formless and voiceless… in their own country.

In a quantitative sense, 3% of just about anything is little enough to be considered marginal and easily ignored. But in this particular case, the 3% is comprised of our brothers and sisters, our doctors, teachers, dentists, lawyers, business owners, military service personnel, parliamentarians, sporting heroes, authors, journalists, entertainers, Australians of the Year… The list goes on. Their existence notwithstanding, these people remain invisible to mainstream Australia.

However, despite initial appearances, this is not a story about the 26 of January, or the Indigenous recognition and treaty aspirations, or the Intervention. It is a story about the silent voices of invisible people – the first people of this nation – and the reclamation of voice and form through creative practice. 


Write Yourself is a writer’s workshop currently underway at the University of Canberra. Headed by Barkandji man, Dr Paul Collis, the workshop targets Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander novice writers and those with an interest in writing. The first session was a quiet affair, filled predominantly by a breathy silence punctuated by finger-taps on laptop keyboards. A former Navy service person, an administrator, a carpenter, a landscaper, a nursing student, and a psychology student all hunch over their devices and engage in the practice of creative writing, but what is the greater goal of the workshop? Dr Collis is quick to answer:

“We’re looking to engage Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander people with the university [of Canberra], and we want to track how success might be gained in terms of completion of degrees. Because art and voice are a core part of Aboriginality, if we provide a creative space where Indigeneity and Indigenous stories can be announced – particularly writing our own stories about ourselves – there may be a greater chance for those students to succeed in getting into and completing university.”

Dr Collis strongly believes that formal education, though forced upon Aboriginal people, is now key to remedying the invisibility problem.

“We engage with it [western education] in all sorts of ways. Unfortunately, one of those ways is to move away from Aboriginal understandings of ourselves and into the realm of the west. So, creating an Indigenous space within the western classroom is what we’re trying to do.”

Dr Jen Crawford of the Write Yourself workshop
Dr Jen Crawford has been one of Dr Collis’ primary collaborators since he gained his PhD, and assists in the running of the workshop. Dr Crawford declares, “Much of what Australians ‘know’ about Indigenous Australians has been written by non-Indigenous people, and much of it is wrong.” Being an avid writer and writing academic, Dr Crawford places great value on workshops such as Write Yourself.

 “We don’t often see Aboriginal people represented in their own voices… their descriptions authored by themselves. What we want to do here is look for ways to support Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander people writing their own stories in their own words.”

Wayne Applebee is a senior Kamilaroi man, currently undertaking his PhD at the university of Canberra. Wayne is boxer, union man, social activist, and has been a long-time friend and co-conspirator (his own words) of Dr Collis. When queried over the notion of Aboriginal invisibility he smacks his massive, knotty fist down on the table and responds with vigour: “It’s something that’s been foisted on us. We’ve never had equal representation with others… In my view, Aboriginal people are probably the most ill-treated group in Australia.”

Mr Wayne Applebee: senior Kamilaroi man
Wayne says that the term invisibility is only half right in this context. “It’s more a selective visibility than complete invisibility, right? We’re unseen and unheard until Australia needs a scapegoat. Then, there we are, on the TV screens, larger than life. All these images of kids sniffing paint and causing violence, drunks in the park… We’re not invisible then, are we? But who put that paint in the kids’ hands? Who put that grog in our elders’ hands? That’s never been our culture, and our culture is older than pretty much anyone else.”

Dr Collis agrees with Wayne that the invisibility experienced by Indigenous people is switched off and on as required by the so-called powers that be, and the media. “I think there is a real fear of any perspective other than the right-wing, white western male that seems to run the media. You do get variations, of course – the recent win for LGBT people being an example – but it’s always, as Deleuze would say, in the minor narrative. The major narrative in this country is the whitefellas. I’m in the minor narrative.”

"Jason": finding his voice at Write Yourself
"Jason" (name changed upon request) is one of the attendees at the Write Yourself workshop. Of all the people in the room he stands out as being almost out of place. Rugged and scarred, street weary, and physically aged well beyond his 22 years, Jason has come in search of his voice. “I met Paul and Wayne few years back at a meeting for Aboriginal offenders out at Bimberi [youth detention centre]. They got me gee’d up to get some education and get away from the shit. I’m in my second year of Psychology now and doing pretty well, but I never learned how to write properly so this workshop is hopefully going to get me on track.” Jason tells a story so familiar to so many young Aboriginal people in this country: one of violence and criminalisation imposed upon him by forces beyond his control. “I was in foster care mostly, bounced around a bit. Most of my family get sick early, and mum and dad both died when I was little. I never had anyone to talk to, no-one to listen [to me].”

Dr Collis explains that Jason’s story, while common, should not be seen as the only road for Aboriginal youth. “We can turn these kids around here. Wayne and myself have done a lot of work in the Circle Courts and Bimberi and other detention centres around Australia, and while the success stories aren’t so numerous, when we get a win it’s like no other feeling on earth. We’ve seen blokes – it’s mostly men and boys we work with – come away from those places with energy to change and make something of themselves, and when they do it magnifies all of us. But the first thing that is required is access to their own voices, the ability to tell their stories to people who actually care. Kids like Jason are going to be the next generation of listeners, and we need to do everything we can to empower people like him to empower the rest of us.”

While the Write Yourself workshop is a relatively small affair, Drs Collis and Crawford maintain the lofty ideals that underscore the project. And their superiors stand by them. Dr Jen Webb is one of the leading cultural theorists in the country, and acted as supervisor, confidant, and friend to Dr Collis for many years in the lead up to his PhD. The workshop is held under the auspices of Dr Webb’s Centre for Creative and Cultural Research (CCCR), and her confidence in Paul and his vision for the cultivation and dissemination of Aboriginal voices is strong. 

Dr Jen Webb: director of the CCCR
“I’ve known Paul for over ten years, and worked very closely with him for most of that time. I arrived in Australia in the 1980s, and as a migrant to this country I was completely ignorant to most of the issues related to living Aboriginal in Australia. Like many Australians still do today, if I was looking for an Aboriginal person or culture I would look out to the desert and seek out the ‘traditional Aboriginals’; people living on country and performing culture and things like that. In my ignorance, I had no idea that many of my colleagues, people in the street, people in cafes, restaurants, shopping centres, the movies, were also Aboriginal. This workshop is a fantastic program that works directly to combat the idea that Aboriginal people are invisible and do not have their own voices and do not have a platform to express themselves through their voice.”

The Write Yourself Indigenous writers' workshop is currently underway at the University of Canberra, from January 29 to February 7.



CASE STUDY: 

DR PAUL COLLIS

Dr Collis: Storyteller heritage

Dr Paul Collis was brought up in amongst an extended family of storytellers. “Everywhere I look art has been a part of my life. It’s performance… it’s story. These storytellers tell me who I am, show how I am connected to the world and how I’m connected to history, but also how I play a role in this world.”

Every component memory of Dr Collis’ life becomes part of a grander story as he tells it. No matter where he begins speaking, he always ends up relating himself back to the world, becoming universally integral to the story of all existence. “I’m a Barkandji person from Bourke, northwest NSW. Out on the Darling river; the river my people call ‘Barka’, which roughly translated into English means ‘my darling’ or ‘my darling one’. So, we are people of the Darling.” He smiles warmly as he speaks about his people, and the river and the country to which he belongs. “In Barkandji we are a matriarchy, we come from the woman’s line. They carry all our stories, all our history, all our laws. The river itself is made by the Rainbow Serpent. Snake, the woman’s totem.” He talks about the laws of his people, and how they are tied to life on country. The purpose-designed codes of conduct and taboo maintain harmonious existence with the land, the creatures, the plants, and the other people.

For tens of thousands of years, Aboriginal people have known about the dangers of in-breeding, of the benefits of a varied and seasonal diet, of the weather patterns and animal migrations and the movement of the stars. But for Dr Collis, this extended body of knowledge has been pushed aside for a new knowledge: the knowledge of the whitefulla. “In whitefulla ways, one individual becomes the spokesperson for the group. It might be a land council or a co-op…the president or CEO or something like that. But that’s not right for us. That was never our way. It was always the group that made the decision, not any one person. No presidents or prime ministers in Barkandji culture. It’s a very western thing...”

He pauses for a moment, looking down into his lap, fidgeting, obviously ill at ease. “People say, ‘you can’t live in the past’, but I’m not trying to live in the past! We’re trying to live our culture in the present. Why is my culture rendered invisible?”

The toll of colonisation is clearly evident in his face and his tone as he laments the destruction wreaked upon his people, and on all Indigenous people in Australia. “They talk about not living in the past, and ‘moving forward’… What do they even mean by that? I notice we don’t ‘move forward’ from ANZAC Day. I notice we don’t ‘move forward’ from Australia Day. We don’t forget those important western things, but I’m just supposed to forget about all my culture and everything and just ‘move forward’?”

He calms quickly, though, and his voice becomes soft once more. “When I started my undergrad in 1995, the internet was just coming in. All the representations of indigeneity in this country were written by western people. Whitefullas writing about us, telling the world who we were, what we did, how we did it… I say stuff that. Let an Aboriginal person… Let me take the microphone, let me take the camera, let me take the pen, and I’ll show you an Aboriginal person you’ve never seen.” This statement relates strongly to his Write Yourself workshop, and it’s aims of facilitating a space for the Aboriginal voice to be heard and the Aboriginal individual to become visible once more. “These voices are important for our own self-preservation, but also to connect and share with other people in the world about who we are. We are a part of this world. We do not live in isolation.”

His passion for his people, and for all Aboriginal peoples, pours out of him as he speaks. There can be no doubt that his principal drive in this life is the edification of non-Indigenous Australia on the topic of the blackfulla: Aboriginal people and Torres Strait Islander people. “We are a modern people. We exist. In this world, at this time, we have an opportunity to be more visible than we ever have been before. If we don’t announce ourselves we run the risk of being told who we are through the lens of others. That’s a real danger, a real fear of what’s happened in the past, and I don’t want it to happen again.”

END.


Wednesday, 17 January 2018

Week 9 video challenge: #alcmuseummemory

Week 9 Video Challenge 

Twitter: #alcmuseummemory




 

This week's video challenge is admittedly a bit grim... The dreaming story of the Seven Sisters is essentially about a group of women desperately trying to escape a rapist. It's not pretty and it's not romantic, but it does shine a light on how long men have been equated with sexual assault, and the even more disgusting fact that this fundamental evil still has not been excised from human society.

Come on, men. We can do better than this. We must do better than this. There is so much about being a man that is friggen awesome, and we can contribute massively to the good in this world if we empower ourselves to be strong and fearless, and overcome our base desires and instincts.

However, there are several monolithic obstacles that stand in the way of educating men and boys towards a better co-existence with the rest of the world. It is these obstacles that perpetuate the same old narrative that men are better than women, and that women (and children, animals, the environment, and "weak" men) have been placed on earth to serve our every whim.

On this topic:

Our fathers, and their fathers, and so on, were WRONG.

Christianity is WRONG.

Islam is WRONG.

Judaism is WRONG.

Trump is WRONG.

...and to be honest, most traditional cultures worldwide are WRONG.

Any social/religious/legal dictum that advocates, accepts, or openly encourages the subjugation and objectification of women (or any person for that matter) is WRONG.

As men, we need to work from a new brief. One that encourages our strengths to shine, and our shortcomings to be quashed. We have proven over the millennia that when we work together we can achieve amazing things to the benefit of all humankind. Let's stop tarnishing our achievements with rape and sexual assault and general fuckwittery.

The bottom line here is that simply being genuine, kind, respectful, and strong but peaceful WILL GET YOU LAID...a lot! Try it out sometime, dudes.

We can, and must, change the narrative here and now.

#alcmuseummemory


Tuesday, 16 January 2018

Culture Couture podcast (week 9 assessment)

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link: Culture Couture (week 9 assessment)


This week on Culture Couture I tackle the question "Does the nature of digital innovation place cultural heritage institutions at risk of becoming redundant?"
 
I speak with the Australian War Memorial's retired senior curator of military technology, Mr John White, and I road-test Google's Arts and Culture project online.


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Wednesday, 10 January 2018

Week 8 video challenge: #alccauseicare

#ALCCAUSEICARE 

Sup y'all, it's Sam back again with my week 8 video challenge:


So, the enclosure shown in the video has taken a couple of weeks to build due to the fact that a) I moved house during the Christmas period and as a result am devastatingly broke! And b) relying on recycled materials I had to be opportunistic and just grab whatever was available whenever it became available.  
Rattie checking out the Currawongs from safety

In a perfect world I would have knocked up a series of wall frame cubes in treated pine and constructed a modular multi-level adventure playground, but to achieve the dimensions I've reached here, that cost is moving towards $2500, where this whole thing ended up costing me approx $300. I did look into pre-fab pet enclosures but that is a racket on par with arms dealing, and I could never justify those costs for something I can build myself.

It was a stressful couple of weeks keeping all four cats locked inside 24/7, and impossible to avoid their revenge (piss and poop in fun and random places, claw marks on everything, 4am wake-up meows, etc). Now they have access to and from the outside world everything has settled down remarkably. The local birds have spent some time checking the enclosure out and are so confident in my building ability that they now perch on the roof and squawk at the cats. 
Weasel enjoying a roll in the dirt

Some of the conversations between my cats and the local Peewees have been pretty hilarious to watch. I will post new pics once I've installed the sandbox and new split level walkway, and planted a few low shrubs to make the space more dynamic for my babies.



Saturday, 9 December 2017

Mi identidad en línea (my online identity)


My vinyl Instagram (pre-2000s hip-hop only)
As a kid in the 80s I used to dream about an online space where I could be and do, well...anything. I have been an avid gamer since I could comprehend the concept of gaming. I played board games whenever I could get my hands on one, and used to design my own with cardboard and magic markers. I soaked up every Choose Your Own Adventure, Lone Wolf, Fighting Fantasy, and Dungeons & Dragons text I could get my hands on (back when physical libraries were a thing). I was inducted into electronic gaming through early board games such as Operation and Battleship, but it was the Apple II and the Commodore 64 that expanded that world into a seemingly limitless set of options. While these machines were truly, truly sick for their time, the video arcade was still the church of gaming, and I burned every cent of my pocket money there whenever I could get to one. Some of you will be old enough to remember how funny it was to tap in the letters "ASS" in the three-letter-capacity high score leaderboard...if your score was high enough, that is. As I think about it now, I'm quite certain that ASS was my very first digital pseudonym, thus my first self-created online identity.
what's in a name? by Devilclone



It was through gaming that I connected with ICT, and the concept of a digital self (which would evolve into "online identity") all the way back when the Apple II was the hot machine. Playing Wizardry, I relished the opportunity to develop a party of characters, stacking each with parts of my persona and a name that I chose for them (see Slideshare). After reading Ursula Le Guin's A Wizard of Earthsea (Le Guin 1968) I developed an intense interest in onomastics: the study of names; specifically proper nouns. I wouldn't learn of or even hear the term "onomastics" until many years later, but I knew that names were important and that they contained palpable energy that might somehow be harnessed to one's benefit.

Our names are our brands. In market terms, brand names are "the semiotic fuel" that propel corporate identity (Danesi 2011, p. 177), and this same semiotic fuel is used to propel our own identities in everyday life. Branding originally entailed literally burning one’s name/symbol into one’s product/possessions. While the physical burning occurs less these days, the concept of burning our identities into peoples' minds is still the fundamental purpose of branding. De Chernatony, McDonald, and Wallace explain that branding is about a relationship between a product and a consumer, and that relationship “is personified either by the company’s name or the brand name on the product itself” (2011, p. 16). Just thinking or saying a known business name is instantly evocative. For example: Coca-Cola, Ford, Aldi, Heineken, Calvin Klein. At least one of those names is likely to have made you think about the associated products as you read it. Isn't that what so many of us want in life: to know that people are thinking about us?


My online identity: delving into the digital self from Samuel Byrnand

NOTE: Please excuse the image resolution on the Slideshare presentation. The app has completely dogged my rez. 

I use the name "Devilclone"  for many components of my overall online identity (see Slideshare), and am fiercely proud of the fact that I managed to secure a handle with syntactic meaning that does not require numbers or special characters to make it valid. Names like 733t_iz_ded, and raggedfunstick94, and even works of art such as -Xx_9nome876_xX- are fine and all, but I personally connect more quickly with an online identity that has a name that I have been inculcated to recognise as a name - bigbill, or MrMaxWebber, or Siobhan. I believe this to be the influence of the doxa inherent in semiotics.


Or maybe I'm just old fashioned.
Regardless, in the word "Devilclone" I have found an original name that I have been able to use across multiple platforms and software packages. I use the name socially and I use it professionally. It is easy to recall because it is a compound of two words that each carry strong connotations in the English speaking world. Names like "Godweapon" or "Lovedeath" would probably work just as well. In gaming forums or chats, people who don't know me usually address me as Devilclone, whereas friends will generally refer to me as Dev, Devil, or DC - like nicknames for my nickname. These abbreviated forms of Devilclone solidify this virtual identity into something more organic, and recognizable as having substance beyond a simple character string. Like how irl people will call me Sam instead of Samuel, it makes the discussion casual, comfortable, and less formal. When you're speaking with "Samuel" - unless you're my grandmother - you and I are likely in some kind of formal setting, bound by etiquette and stricture. But when you're chatting with "Sam", you're having a chill time with a chill guy, definitely not a robot or a script. 


My kitty-cat Instagram

Names in the online sphere are academically interesting. They form a source of metadata that can be mined for all sorts of research possibilities. Papers such as Designing for the commercial exploitation of online identity (Emmanouil 2017), What's in a name? Ages and names predict the valence of social interactions in a massive online game (Kokkinakis, Lin, Pavlas & Wade 2016), and Social movements and email: expressions of online identity in the globalization protests (Wall 2007) comprise little more than a drop in the bucket of total academic interest in the topic. 

Considering names are so often simply taken for granted, we sure do spend a lot of time ruminating about, researching, arguing over, and developing proper nouns. I recall watching John Oliver make fun of the fact that US President Donald Trump's family name was originally "Drumpf" and was caught up in the humor of it all. Upon later reflection I realised that I was chuckling at a name that is common enough in Germany, and certainly not deserving of derision simply for the sound it forms on the tongue as perceived by English ears. Years earlier, on Letterman (yes, I love American TV), Dave had been tipped off about a person living in Canada with the name Dick Assman. They called Mr Assman - a service station attendant at the time - live on the show and he managed to garner some celebrity out of the encounter, which became known internationally as "Assmania" (this is not made up...some of you will remember this, the rest can easily Google it). Assman's full name was Richard Arthur Assman, and his last name is pronounced "oss-man" in the original German. He died in 2016, but it is doubtful a person with that name will ever be forgotten. 


My Canberra region street art Instagram
One last recollection that involves a German name: Fanny Chmaler. I cannot possibly convey in writing the awkward hilarity of this incredibly insensitive game show host losing his mind over the name Fanny Chmelar...so click here to see for yourself.

It is obvious that names are vital components of our individual identities, and living and operating in this globalised communications data ocean we call the internet (well, the "world wide web", to be specific...the internet is a related but different thing) has given us the opportunity to brand ourselves and become whomever we choose to be at the stroke of a few keys. 

I have chosen Devilclone.



References

Danesi, M 2011, What's in a Brand Name? A Note on the Onomastics of Brand Naming, Names, vol. 59, no. 3, 175-185.

De Chernatony, L, McDonald, M, and Wallace, E 2011, Creating Powerful Brands,
Butterworth-Heinemann, Oxford, UK.

Emmanouil, D 2017, Designing for the commercial exploitation of online identity. PhD thesis, University of Nottingham. 

Kokkinakis A, Lin J, Pavlas D, Wade A 2016, What's in a name? Ages and names predict the valence of social interactions in a massive online game, Computers in Human Behavior, vol. 55, no. PB, 605-613.

Le Guin, U 1968, A Wizard of Earthsea, Parnassus, USA.

Wall, M 2007, Social movements and email: expressions of online identity in the globalization protests, Sage Journals, vol. 9, no. 7, 258-277.

Images

All images property of author: ©Samuel Byrnand 2017

 


Wednesday, 6 December 2017

Australian poetry: you’re almost a grown up now…time to start acting like it


ALJ728

by

Samuel Byrnand (217604105)


Thursday, September 21, 2017: the final night of the  3rd annual Poetry on the Move (POTM) festival, held at the University of Canberra. Steven Oliver of Black Comedy fame is MC’ing and presenting the Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander Poetry Prize. His small physical stature is exaggerated to behemoth proportions as he storms across the auditorium stage, spitting an a capella filled with rage and passion and hope into his mic. The crowd may not be used to this kind of poetry – this blazing, visceral rap that (god forbid) rhymes – but Oliver’s presence fills the room, his sharp staccato vocals shake dusty expectations to the floor, and his message bores into every person politely seated in their finery, battering old-fashioned sensibilities, and enlivening the young and young at heart.



Oliver’s hip-hop bent comes as a surprise to some; an unexpected dose of wake-the-heck-up at what otherwise promised to be a more solemn and sombre event. To others, however, it comes as the breath of fresh air that Australian performance poetry might desperately need.

Australian poetry – steeped in a foundation of pastoral romanticism – might require some of these new flavours; these screams, stamps, shouts, expletives exploding from shameless mouths, cries of anguish at the state of one’s people, at the state of one’s nation, at the state of the world in all its pointless and agonizing trials. And if this is the case then surely the POTM festival, with its rapidly expanding international profile, and all the connotations inherent in its very name, is the place to test the new sound.

"Having enthusiastic young people on board is good for any creative community."


recent work press catalogue
The 2017 Recent Work Press catalogue, published by Shane Strange
Shane Strange is the founder and editor of Recent Work Press – a local Canberra publishing house that specialises in poetry from local, national and international artists. Shane is also closely involved in the operations behind POTM. He believes that the exclusion of forms that employ rhyme (such as hip-hop, limerick, and Australian bush poetry) is due to the fact that there is no market for rhyming verse in what is known to some as ‘high culture’ poetry.

"There's definitely a disconnect between the rhyming forms and this high culture poetry."


“There’s a space for hip-hop and there’s a space for high culture poetry, and while there might be some overlap on occasion, you’re really talking about two different things.” Shane explains that the rhyming forms tend to be geared towards performance to a live audience, and that these forms do not necessarily translate well onto the page. “That said, I don’t think there was a single person in the house who wasn’t moved by Steven Oliver’s rap. There is real power in that style.”

Dr Paul Collis is a Barkandji man and poet who teaches creative writing at the University of Canberra. Dr Collis indicates that there might some active classism within certain literary circles regarding hip-hop style: “Rhyming poetry is seen as being too easy, too simplistic…perhaps naïve by nature. Hip-hop is still considered to be kiddy stuff by some people, you know? There’s definitely a disconnect between the rhyming forms and this high culture poetry they talk about.” 

Dr Paul Collis(L) and Shane Strange(R) at POTM 2017
Dr Collis continues to explain that while this exclusivity clearly exists in poetic circles, it is overall a very inclusive community that openly welcomes poets from every known nation and cultural and linguistic background. “As an Aboriginal man, I haven’t always felt safe or welcome in certain communities in this country, but the poetry mob here are generally a wonderful bunch of interesting folks who hail from just about every country on the planet. It really is a multicultural success story – unfortunately, one that is not always mirrored in the broader Australian society.”

Poetry is largely agreed to be a place where cultural heritage is celebrated by all involved. It is, however, an unfortunate fact that this fellowship of cultures still acts to reinforce wide-reaching traditional patriarchal standards, maintaining systems of inequality in gender and sexual identity. 

"Poetry can still be quite accepting of male sexual violence towards women and this is something that must change."


Katie Hayne is an administrator at the University of Canberra who is deeply involved in the administrative operations of POTM. Katie observes that while the poetry community works hard to provide a safe and welcoming space for women and queer people, this is not always the case.

Katie Hayne(L) with POTM 2017 symposium keynote, Glyn Maxwell(R)
“It still seems to be largely a male space, and this is never more evident than when men choose to recite sexually explicit material to rooms full, or half full, of women.” Katie explains that sexually explicit material is still popular, though mostly among older male poets. Katie’s concerns speak to deeper issues within the poetry community: the sanctity of the form, and the dominance of the patriarchal paradigm that still pervades.

Katie continues, “I think inclusion of a broader set of forms, and especially fresher forms like hip-hop, would be good for things. Obviously, having enthusiastic young people on board is good for any creative community – helps shake out the cobwebs.”

Lydia Chan at the 2017 University of Canberra Poetry Prizes ceremony
Katie’s concerns are mirrored by Lydia Chan, an emerging poet visiting Canberra from Singapore. “I would say I am a fan of hip-hop, but we have to be honest and admit that lots of it is quite derogatory toward women. Poetry does not escape judgment in this regard. It  can still be quite accepting of male sexual violence towards women and this is something that must change.”

Australian poetry is young, a teenager at most, and seems to be undergoing the painful hormonal changes that adolescent entities suffer through. This is a time of confusion and torn emotions for poetry in this country. Perhaps now is the time for Australia to consider appointing a Poet Laureate; some kind of steady experienced hand designated to provide a standard. That’s not to say that Australian poetry should solidify into a specific, unchanging form. Try demanding that of any poet, anywhere, and see how far it gets you! The suggestion here is that the agreement of a standard provides a base point from which to measure and calculate innovation and development of form and style.

The bottom line is that the world is changing at an increasing speed. Australian poetry might need to pick up the pace a little to remain relevant in a current context.